Reviews for Welcome to the House of Madness |
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![]() ![]() great chapter. loved the ending! write more soon please kellie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wah finally, an interesting story! Im intrigued to know what happens next hehe, i can imagine lots of ways this could go but its playing out pretty interesting so far! I love how we get it from Megs POV, it gives much more attitude and depth to her character. Please keep it up! A bit more detail would be cool too, but thats only cos all the guys are confusing me *grin*I await your update! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, she must like alex because, i don't know just because. He seems pretty cool but you aren't suppose to hook up in that house right? Hm, I don't know. But I do love the story, reminds me of some people I know, maybe I have already mentioned that, I don't remember if I did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome, i like it, yay! finally something that almost relates to me, lmao, don't ask. SO much in relation! yes! lmao. UPDATE SOON! ~Nikkole~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the developments so far, and the way you portray the character, i.e somewhat sarcastic is shown in her speech. I love it. Plus, I was hooked as soon as she commented on the fact that guys do really take longer in the shower. I have always found this to be true. Great work, hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() eek she sounds scarily like me...shy at first and a little...um unique once you get to know her for like a week or so |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I laughed the whole time. XD Sarcasm makes me happy, haha. Can't wait to see what makes all these kids tick, Megan seems like she's got alot to 'er. Anywho keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey. i love it and i dont think it was dull at all. lol. that ryhmed! anyways, different POV's would be cool but do what you want. write more soon please kellie |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absotively posilutely amazing! (Spoonerism intentional)Me likey very much. Of course, I hate Meg's guts for being such a lucky bitch, but so it goes, right? Keep writing! You've got a great style, lots of humor, and I can't wait to see more from you - and soon - or else...Wow, I just totally broke my promise not to threaten anyone today...HALLOWEEN is TOMORROW! (sorry...) |
![]() ![]() Loverly beginning, keep up the good work. If I were you, I would try to do as many POV's as you can (making sure you acknowledge the change, i.e. say [in bold] Alex's POV or Megan's POV!), that usually makes the story more interesting and complex. You've got a really good start, just make sure you update regularly! |