Reviews for Red Car Lightning
Jada.Black chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Wow! This is...amazing. You have my deepest praise. Pleze review me sometime.

*Jada Black*
flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Wow this is beautiful. I love your vision. Your words are like a cry from hell.

account not in use chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
i like that-an object and a danger as an emotion.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
'A disjointed heart' was a powerful way to start the poem. Another line I really loved was 'paper cut kisses' which slightly contradicted itself in a great way. I could really relate to that line, and it gave me a feeling of how even the good can hurt type of thing to put it simply.

Anyway, amazing poem.

Gilton chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
i like the phrase "paper cut kisses." I found the mix of apathy and magnetic current intrestingly ironic, and the word usage was good
UnfortunateSoul chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
I grapsed the meaning of the last line, I do believe. All in all, I like it. Nice word choice, very emotional.

candyaddict chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
okay, I didn't get the poem the first time through, but the second time, it made sense.

I like your choice of words, and the pure angst of the poem.

Though I didn't get the last line..

‘Red Car Lightning is my best emotion.’”