Reviews for Don't eat the apple
Torey Hylton chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Hmm...very weird but not scary. Just weird.
Lostwind chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Very good, but rather short. Check out my Halloween Story, Deep Twilight, if you wish, but your story was pretty good for the short length it was told in. Keep writing, I would like to see more.