Reviews for Whirlover In Rhythm, In Cadence
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
may i just comment on the HEAVENLINESS of the word "whirlover"? it's BEAUTIFUL! i love how the whole poem conveys smooth sliding swirling movement, so elegant and maddening... excellent. simply amazing.
kit feral chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I love it. It's excellent- as usual. My favorite parts were "Dance, Ballerina with the words you keptlove would have gone in the end (wouldn't it, Ballerina?)" and "It was only a whirlover so whirl, Ballerina, whirl..." and especially "with the porcelain gleam in your eyes (LIAR)". I adore it. The whole thing is just bittersweet. It's beautiful. Never stop writing, Panda- you rock.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
i've read the book~ the poem gives off such a sad, yet breathtakingly beautiful atmosphere~ good work!

keep writing!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
are folded into fragments andunknown in your silence

-Love those lines, and the line about the Ballerina; beautiful work, you really created a solid and powerful mood in this.