|Reviews for In Your Presence|
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
We all make mistakes.
| phthalo blue chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Great writing. I love the end. "And you, are my mistake."
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
this had a very warm feeling to it that i love, muchly nice and sweet and hurtful
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Aw...sweet, and well described!
| A.J. Paterson chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
Thought I'd pop by after your review of my poem :)
I really like this, well written and I can so relate to it :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
I like this.. it's subtle & beautiful & the last stanza is great
| hailstar9090 chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
well..., it was better then the other thing that i reviewed
| Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
That was refreshing, pure and sweet romance poem/song. You added innocent flavor into the "Action" wonderfuly done.