|Reviews for beyond here|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
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I really like this. It's ironic how in writing about not pouring your soul out into poetry that others will read, you told so much personal feeling. Most poems discuss what you discussed here, but on a more personal, specific level. The way you wrote it, I think every reader can relate in their own way.
My only suggestion would be to add some punctuation. It would clear things up and make this easier to read.
Nice work :)
| Seth T chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
this is good, I like I like.