Reviews for Unforgivable
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
sigh... i can relate... must hurt...~~ good work, although maybe a shorter authors note can make it seem even more powerful

keep writing!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
very straightforward. thx 4 sharing and k33p writing!

p.s. God
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
This is another great poem as always... I hope things start going better for you and that everything is well. Until Later, Kriss