Reviews for Girl in the Mirror |
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![]() ![]() ![]() imoressive. it has a quality about it thats familar but i cant place it. kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Bleed out your disease Bleed out my release Bleed out all my pain Restore all my faith" I l-o-v-e that part! Brilliant work, Christine. _ ~~Casserz~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow- as usual with your work- im speechless |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the imagery in this, it's very vivid to me. However the line 'start to commence' is a little forced and is not as clear as it could be. When you're writing a rhyming poem it can be fairly obvious that you've written lines just to rhyme, and it can fall a little only other line I feel isn't quite right is in the chorus. The first line does not rhyme but the next three do and it just feels strange to read. It is a great song, though you've done a wonderful job. I like it, it's very powerful. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. I really liked this, so well written and very powerful especially the last 4 lines. QueenVixta |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so very beautiful, excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really emotional, I've flet this way many times. By the way I've reviewed you before, under my old user name (bleeding roze) I have three poems up if you want read them and I'll say now they arent the best.~sierra~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. Your descriptions and the way you wind the story into your song is just amazing. Great job again! Much love, Lady Glass |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sad an angst-filled. But beautiful in itself. Great work. |