imoressive. it has a quality about it thats familar but i cant place it. kudos.

"Bleed out your disease Bleed out my release Bleed out all my pain Restore all my faith"

I l-o-v-e that part! Brilliant work, Christine. _

~~Casserz~~

wow- as usual with your work- im speechless

I like the imagery in this, it's very vivid to me. However the line 'start to commence' is a little forced and is not as clear as it could be. When you're writing a rhyming poem it can be fairly obvious that you've written lines just to rhyme, and it can fall a little only other line I feel isn't quite right is in the chorus. The first line does not rhyme but the next three do and it just feels strange to read. It is a great song, though you've done a wonderful job. I like it, it's very powerful. Great work!

Beautiful. I really liked this, so well written and very powerful especially the last 4 lines. QueenVixta

This is so very beautiful, excellent work!

This is really emotional, I've flet this way many times. By the way I've reviewed you before, under my old user name (bleeding roze) I have three poems up if you want read them and I'll say now they arent the best.~sierra~

I loved this. Your descriptions and the way you wind the story into your song is just amazing. Great job again!

Much love,

Lady Glass

So sad an angst-filled. But beautiful in itself. Great work.