That's sad...

Wow, this was quite short, but sad and beautiful at the same time! Amazing! You're a real good poet with such talent. Keep writing! And don't let anybody ever stand in your way in doing so. Much love, Cool-Ruzz

Wow, it's short and I like it. It's actually rather good. Short & fast suicide.

xo Tristis

woww... love it...u could expand it if u want like taking it that only the dead ghosts could hear her or something... just a thought dont have to take it at all...keep writting.. i luv ur stuff

Beautiful. I love it:o)