Reviews for Forgotten Pains
David deHaas chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
flowed very nicely, good job
WinterDeity chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
aww...you have a knack for poetry, i can tell! Scars...scars are always bad. you keep with the rhyme scheme well. i'm jumping from topic to topic aren't I? Um...keep up the good work! *tilts head to one side* hm...i guess i can just say I loved it! making people everywhere feel sane, Winter
natasha chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Again- wow! This one was- I don't know...I don't wanna say better than the first...it has different feelings that it conveys. It was great...really loved it. I actually got a little teary!
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
cool ending. love the rhyming as always. ur flow is perfect and the wordings fantastic! another great poem,

mez
LoveAlways05 chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
I'm glad you posted this poem cause it was really really good! the flow of it was awsome!
1138 chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Interesting. I liked it!
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
You do know that you are a very talented poet? I love the play of emotions in this, and the ending which was really good. You have a real flair for poetry. Really excellent.

Trinity
boundtobreak chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
WOW, this was excellent Hayley.I loved the rhyming it all flowed very up the good work and KW.
kawaii -kitty-kitty chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
it's realy really GOOD!:)
silentscreamer07 chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
wow...this was amazing. Not only did you chose awesome wordings, but there's def. alot of feeling behind it. And i think that helps it have more meaning. I know how it feels to post a more personal poem, that you dont really wanna post, yet, you do. Ive posted some like that. Ne ways. I loved this, and i hope everything is okay. *smiles* *kw* I really like everything you've written so far! Hope to see ya soon! i havent in weeks! George
Ang-Dev chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
*sighs*...this is just so incredibly beautifully written! i LOVE this poem and the rhyme scheme is amazing. i can only say, that this is DEFINITELY going on our favs and u better keep writing lol. great job, mez
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Aw! Sad, yet well written! Write on!

Anna
gummibared chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
About a girl 'who's name I won't mention', who lied to all her friends including me, and then moved away without even saying goodbye :(