|Reviews for astral plane|
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
and it's been eons since i last visited this site - i love this! the delicate imagery and the alliteration and the way it sounds when read aloud _ (yes i did read it aloud)
| With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
"strung as space tinsel"
That made me think of a Christmas tree the first time I read it, but now I understand how it relates to the Milky Way (not criticism, just my own stupidity, ha). Nice job with the form.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
ohmygod. ohmygod. ohmygod.
alright, teenage hormones/insanity aside; I love this. you always make haikus so frivalous and easy to construct when they are so HARD and rot the brain (my opinion. sorry if it offends). I just lovelovelovelove the first line, as it had me giggling for some time, and the second line equally. I am quite pleased with the ending. sums it up rather nicely. oh. . .PERFECT.
| Elraralia chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I am always excessively diverted by the use of "Milky Way" but that's just me being an egghead.
I like it! I never know how to critique haikus, but yup, I like it!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I like it; keep up the good work.