Reviews for After Eden
citrus scented chapter 3 . 11/8/2005
i like that echo of the first installment. this is quickening the pace.
citrus scented chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
wow the images are bitter and yet so strangely vivid and real. this is quite unlike anything ive read before.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
"a body that had learnt to love all over again, shadowing the bruises

"a body that loved the taste of Apples and snow

and she remembered in a haze of blinding perfection

that there had been no snow in Eden."- trembling and beautiful and fierce. this looks set to be good, and you're right the title is wonderful.
emmathree chapter 3 . 11/6/2005


So incredibly incredible... and such a bitter retelling.
Dartxni chapter 1 . 11/6/2005

and she remembered in a haze of blinding perfection

that there had been no snow in Eden.

I liked all the parts but those two lines hit their mark well.
Aryanda chapter 3 . 11/3/2005
"A name in vain, a name to blame

say it softly or you'll never live it down"

I loved those two lines, for some reason. Great piece, it really made me think.
Aryanda chapter 2 . 11/3/2005
Creepy, but still enchanting.
Aryanda chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
astounding...I love how it was written, and the last line gives it so much more. great job!
strawberry-toast chapter 3 . 11/2/2005
c'est tres bon
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I found the last line in particular, highly amusing. I just love the feel to this. the dramatic flare and just your word use, which is divine. very keenly spoken and woven in a gorgeous fashion. love it.

~* noelle
Ajna chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
Chilling... I don't normally comment on things involving religious imagery, but this is just wonderful. I can just picture everything you wrote about here. Though "learnt" should be "learned." Good work nonetheless.
UnfortunateSoul chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I like!