I really liked this poem. It is sad without being overly sentimental. Good job!

This is good work! The depth in your poetry is noteworthy. The meter from line to line may be inconsistent, but they still seem to synergize somehow.

This is mai, again! And this was another wonderful peice of writing! . That was really really really pretty. Okay, I'm not very good at reviewing, but I loved it! Really!I especially like the first four lines. pretty. :D

Deep and well-detailed, very nice; I loved the metaphore about the eggshell. Lovely, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.