Reviews for The Missing Piece
Alley Rhodes chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
heck yes, that is what we women need... ah, thank God for Jake... :)...and Ryan too, huh?

~mia
Clockwork Angel chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
hmm...I really like the simplicity of the poem and how it feels like a shout-out or a calling to men who read it to be what the poem wants them to be _

And I apologize for being such a grammar smartass but you've got minor spelling error (frears...fears?)

All in all it was an impressive piece..really straight from the heart
Naibz chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
very nicely wirtten. hope you find that piece soon. good luck. and keep up the good work.