Reviews for The Day
Broken doll on a dirty shelf chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Excellent! I was glad to see a new work from you up. This was just...awesome? - Great job, I loved your work here.

HarlequinPlease fix me...
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Aw I love it. The chorus is really nice... I'm probably understanding this whole poem wrong, cause I'm listening to "Popular" from the play Wicked lol but either way I still love sowwy if I made you cry.

-freak from the corner
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
This is beautiful, excellent work!
Shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Vunderbar!...great SONG, not poem, ahem...Mutters *retards*...lol...
Plinky chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Lovely poem, it's so true - I think everyone is waiting for their life to get better, everyone expects to suddenly wake up one morning and find everything is perfect suddenly.

Beautifully written, lovely ending. It's a happy poem! Lol.

As always, I love your poetry. Keep writing! ;-)
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I love this one. I think I'm first to review! Am I?

Anyways...I love it.