Reviews for Painted Wings
alter-ego52 chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
I can really picture this as a song, great job.
aaidenkae chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
i loved verse 2. but it was all lovely. thank you!-kae
Yokotaashi chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
kinda confusing but deep, I like it it would make a great song lyric
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Love it.
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
oh! so sad. so beautiful. well done, very well done. oh, it's lovely. I love the image that you can see defeat in their eyes, that their wings are painted on now, instead of being real things of feather and warmth
KimEh-3 chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
"My butterfly, those painted wings are starting to fade away" I love this line!

Very deep, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!

P.S. Thanks for the review!
Lyrabird chapter 1 . 11/4/2005
every time i read it it grows on me. its really good and symbolic. but i did like same old tricks better. i'd say that and ice queen are your best ones. but still this is really really goodlove lyra!
loyanofviolence chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
very metophoric...if that's how you spell it P. Good poem, your emotion stands out strong in this piece. The only thing that I failed to understand was the repeating oh's and try's in the chorus. Keep writing.

Staring at the Infamous...
i-miss-roses chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
you spelt chorus wrong. sorry. i'm annoying about spelling.

I LOVE THIS SONG. The title is beautiful. I will favourite it because I love it and relate to it so much. The bridge is beautiful, as is the rest of it.