Fascinating work. I would love to read the completed story.

Really good story I read it all in one day. I love it it's a really interesting story,different but wonderful. I'll love to read more of it but I've seen you haven't updated it in a long time, I was wondering if you where going to keep on writing this story or not. Hope that you do, if you are then please update soon. Thanks! _

Oh, whoa! This is flippin' awesome! Please update this soon, I am begging you!

Hey, i love this story. The concept is great. Please update soon.

Oh my goodness, I freaking love this story! It's so funny and I don't even get it! I absolutely cannot wait until the next update!

Oh, and it could just be my ancient computer, but I think you have to fix number 5 because it just stops after the first five sentences.

If I'm wrong and it's just my computer then just say so and I'll shut up.

Once again, I LOVE this story!

Hmm. I like this. Update?

I love it, great story, - its an amazing idea! -

Yay you updated D

I actually like Gwyn. He's so cute when he is angry xD Maybe he likes her since he did stick up for her at the end.

I wonder if Aaya is a powerful person if thats y the teacher suddently became nice.

I also like how you make up all these technology stuff haha so creative!

I cant wait for chapt 10!

MAN. I really thought there was more chapters for me to enjoy, but unfortunately the road stops here. (:

Haha. Gwyn like, defended Inaret towards the end...he's obviously so intimidated by her good looks, lol. Even Inaret said he was handsome.

Hahha the teacher made me laugh. He was super scary and then he turned nice. But the one thing that had me cracking up was this:

(I could see another narrow walkway to a floating pod taxi. I groaned when I saw a familiar silhouette sitting inside.

“We have the cowboy driver again.” I groaned.

“Cowboy?” I sighed, and decided not to mention it again.)

LMAO. I LOVE THAT DRIVER! (:

Though I'm still confused on some things, I have a feeling I will find out later, so I can't wait till the next chapter!

I wonder what Gwyn's problem is with Inaret. She's so nice and fierce lol. I love her. (:

Her and Bryn are so cute.

I think Gwyn just secretly likes her for some reason. I'm getting that vibe.

Or maybe she reminds him of a past lover or something.

Anyway, great chapter!

OMG.

Gwyn is such a bitch I swear if I was Inaret I would've slapped him already. Damn. :(

Anyways, I love their slang and way of talking lol. I laughed at the part where Bryn was like, "spiders have been extinct since 2200s, and Inaret was like, Oh."

Great job!

Oh My Gosh.

This story is so good. I seriously can't get up because of it.

I love the way you write, it's so descriptive and I can picture nearly everything that goes on...(haha my view of Bryn and Inaret is kinda vague in that matter).

I'm going to sit here and read the rest. Just 'cause I have nothing better to do.

Great job!

One chapter? aww.

Please update again!

i love the story!

will she end up with gwyn or bryn?

and what will happen to her? haha :)

hmm interesting little bit of info there at the end. i love all the technology as usual (esp the shower/drying thing.) just wondering however, when bryn mentioned there not being enough trees are there any really left there and how do ppl get to them.

I just found this story and read it all and I really like it. I cant wait for more although you havent updated since 2007