OMG AMAZING STORY! I am soooo glad that this isn't the last cahpter! UPDATE SOON!

more more more ;)

love this x

Aw this story was like so cute, i enjoyed it. I guess if you don't have the heart to continue it then i guess you shouldn't that's all part of being a writer, life has it's ups and downs. :)(i realize I've been using smiley faces a lot, i must actually be really getting into the writing mood.)

I love dhis story! How convinient for da popcorn machine to be there wit popped kernels...you're the only author that can make a kidnapping story funny an semi- realistic...its great!

Just read you're profile.

I do admit, that it was kinda silly. Suddenly she was kidnapped by a weirdo pyschopath who's like "Lie to the priest" and then blows up the castle.

It was written decently though. And that's coming from a picky author.

At least you got farther than I ever did. I only ever make it to chapter 2 or so. And I'm 16, been writing since I was 12.

But really, Sara and Connor were cute. Awesome job for making it farther than I can.

And now I'm gonna start paying attention to those dates about updates...

I just saw when this story was last updated.

Damn it.

I love this story. It's cute, funny, romantic, and has this strange fantasy touch to it. Awesome!

I love your characters too. They're all really funny and unique. They all make such cute couples too.

I hope you update soon!

Hello dear. I've been reading your story, and truthfully it ain't very different from all the rest on this site.

1. a *shy* bookworm that turns out to be totally crazy and not very bookwormish at all. oh. my. god. so original. you want your characters to be 'realistic'? please make them so. It's very easy to make a character crazy, but much harder to make a character actually funny.

2. the whole gabriel thing in this chapter? frankly it was crap. Was it 'realistic' of them to scare off a bunch of would be rapists like that? Hell no.

3. The sappy stuff you've got in here is so totally unrealistic it's cringeworthy. At least *try* and make the dialogue sound real.

i finally understand. i like blowing random things up also. oh great. is gabriel gonna go all robin hood on us?

That was a great story, but its not finished yet! Update! :D

This seems like a very interesting story! :D

PLEASE UPDATE! I REALY LOVE THIS STORY!

haha! cute and funny

Your story is totally ridiculous... and I love it! After all these heavy, angsty romances it's so nice to read something light for once. Bizarre as they may be, the twists and turns in your story are actually fairly comprehensible and, of course, extremely laughable. As soon as I read the chapter with Gabriel, I knew I would love this story. Not only is that an awesome name, it just suddenly got so nuts that I couldn't stop reading. Connor is, of course, smexalicious and I wish I could steal him out of your story and into my... room, yeah, room (of course I wasn't thinking 'bed') Thanks for adding laughter to my day (as cliche as that sounds)

omg, where are you!

you need to get on right now and update this story, missy.