Reviews for Slave and Master, Part 1:Consequences
Widom chapter 26 . 5/26/2006
Widom chapter 25 . 5/26/2006
*smacks guards and slave-trader-guy* How dare you abuse poor Calen!
Widom chapter 23 . 5/26/2006
And here's where the title comes from. :)
Widom chapter 22 . 5/26/2006
Woot! More dead assassins, more angst, and then more cryptic foreshadowing. A nice chapter, this.
Widom chapter 21 . 5/26/2006
Good. Happiness is what's important, not reality.

I liked this chapter. I'll bet I know who the man is (God, I feel like a geniush...)and I'm glad that Calen was happy for at least ONE moment.
Widom chapter 20 . 5/26/2006
I'm not sure whether I should laugh at Darian's problems or not, especially considering your description. "Brainless twits" just about covers it, I think, but then there are always people out there who can't understand refusal. I generally laugh at them, actually.
Widom chapter 19 . 5/26/2006
Poor Calen. He has lost his humanity in a sense: all he can do is survive, by whatever means. It's tragic, considering how young he is.
Widom chapter 18 . 5/26/2006
And how many people does an average 13 year old boy kill, exactly? Are there statistics on these sorts of things?I'm kidding. I understand the gravity of the situation, and am really just sitting here going "Give up all ready you dumb King." If five people didn't accomplish the task, then why send more? I think attempted assassination is really one of those things where you can tell how effective it is right away.
Widom chapter 17 . 5/26/2006
Poor Darian. Depressing memories combined with math is enough to give anyone a headache...
Widom chapter 16 . 5/26/2006
Wow, that was the single saddest thing I've read in years...made me so depressed, and I really feel bad for Calen...but it had to happen. *sniff*You and your anti-angst foreshadowing is all that saved me from bursting into tears.
Widom chapter 15 . 5/26/2006
AH-HA! The missing chapter!Chapter 11, which I was assuming was just a mislabeling, really was supposed to be in the place of chapter 11. Sorry to be the one to tell you this and, again, I don't really mind...because Fayn is suddenly back to life! *happy dance*
Widom chapter 14 . 5/26/2006
Well, that chapter was remarkably calm. I'd even say it was a nice, relaxed conversation between twins if it wasn't for that LAST BLASTED SENTENCE...Right. Blame the caps lock for that. :)
Widom chapter 13 . 5/26/2006
I just realized you really like names that end with an 'n':Galen, Calen, Darian, Fayn, Caylyn, Branfin...oh my god, Desmond! I don't's just an observation. And now I've forgotten what else I was going to say...So, when in doubt...NO! Fayn!
WitchGhost chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
I only read the first chapter since I have no time to read all 3. But anyways good job on the first chapter but spelling is a mystery to me.
Widom chapter 12 . 5/26/2006
NO! Fayn! *choke sob cry*Now I'm all depressed. He was a damned good brother, if I do say so myself, and I do believe I liked him more than the twins. However, I accept that he had to go. I'm sad, but your bit about Galen's afterlife helps. Just because you're dead doesn't mean you can't help out!
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