|Reviews for The fucked up child of society|
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
if you read it really fast it is really amazing and the flow is great...i love it, i can relate to everything, well done for expressing so much.
lots of loveAC
| Leeona Trance chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
It's like you read my mind. You said everything about society that I wanted to say, but couldn't find the words for. Wonderful job. "Flawless on the outside, sinking underneath/ No soul, an empty heart, hollow eyes" My favorite lines right there. I agree, it flows, but in its own way. Perfect.
| Ode to Maddness chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
This is so true, Society has gone down the shitter and our gereration is takeing the brunt of the sewage.
Yet another fantastic poem. keep it up!
-Stay Insane-Ode to Maddness-
| K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Great poem. The point and emotions that occur down the road that we "fucked up children of society" follow come through very clearly. Nicely down, please write more.
| Mr. Raven chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
and i agree
| Kressida chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
I like this. It's so full of anger and emotion. Great work! Favs this time. )
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
That was really cool and very true. I like it how you've observed society.
| The Haruspex chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Yes I am a fucked up child of soceity. Yayness. Well not really happy but you get what you get. I loved this poem it was really realistic
| An Eccentric Caffeine Addict chapter 1 . 11/4/2005
That was awesome! In such a simple way you stated the bitter truth. We truly are in a world where everything is crap. Loved it and I wait for more.
| Ajna chapter 1 . 11/4/2005
Sad but true... I love the way this all flows together really well. Awesomely done.