|Reviews for Eloquence into the Night|
| Dracula Lord of the Vampires chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Cool. Very nicely done.
| fantasyEsalno chapter 1 . 11/4/2005
I liked it, it was beautifully written... however, there is one thing you need to change.
"Yet the moon repels you,
And draws you to its light"
'Draws you' means to attract, which is the opposite of repel. Or is there some odd meaning in that which I haven't gotten? :D
| Ajna chapter 1 . 11/4/2005
Morbid and oh-so beautiful... I enjoyed reading this.