|Reviews for Into the Light|
| ChildofRevelation chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
Touching. Beautiful. Everything wonderful. I really enjoyed it.
I'vve realized that the short poems often have the most meaning and this one is that.
| Morcirith chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
hmm. random end quotation marks. i ponder their secret meaning.
| FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
aw...that is just SO SWEET! i just love the ending in this! beautiful and sincere. FABULOUS work, keep writing and thanx loads for ur awesome reviews!
| sad-infamy chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Pretty, but isn't that vivid as I would like. I will forgive you this time because I this is only your first story, and I was kind of hoping for something critical and awesome like your other poems. I dunno. Am I being annoying?
Ending was good though. I liked it, anyway. As first reviewer said, check spelling errors. I don't know if you read the reviews you get, but I sure do. Each and every one of them *smiles narcissistically*. LOL. Pretty good though. Shortness. Very short.
Signed Review: X-Eragon-X
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
O...pretty. It ends good.
You misspelled "findig".
Very cute poem.
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
The ending just brought a smile to my face. It was s obeautiful and makes me wish it was said to me.
Thanks for all your warm reviews.
| L.M.Crow chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Okay. Cute. spell check, because Finding is spelt wrong. check punctuation. Read it out loud before you post anything.