Reviews for Rabbit Hole
Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
...Today is a Sunday in passing...came upon this writing you have penned...feels more so liken to being in a Church with The Message being proclaimed...good style of a devotinal to meditate upon.
Morcirith chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
mint maxwell chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
i like this one. it shows a lot of strong emotion. I can almost hear you saying it even though i have never heard your voice. you've got skill.
L.M.Crow chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
if you said Call one more time I would have to slap you.

mix up your vocab, use a thesaurus if necessary, but learn new words. I dont agree with the principle, and knowing you, this is kind of hypocritic. test your logic in your language