Reviews for Paganistic Poem
The Postscript chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Interesting...the style is exquisite. Carefully worded yet the flow comes naturally as well. Bonus for the using nice capitilaztion to make some words stand out. Maybe too full of those little words, but then again if you tried to replace them you could disrupt that flow, so I don't know what to do there. It's just a preferance and style, so I see no reason to harp on such a subject. Well, keep writing.
karmakaze chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
The line "unlike the followers that believe in a selfish religion..." didn't seem to flow with the rest of it. But I loved the poem overall, and the idea that believing in something and giving yourself to that something is what it means to have faith. Great work.