Reviews for Train Wreck at Las Vegas
The Silver Tiger chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
wow nice
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
The emotions in this piece, sound touchingly honest. Reading about your pain and how you described it, just made my heart break.

Keep writing, you words keep me captivated.

L.M.Crow chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
you know how i feel about emo poetry.

This one got ruined.


to many prepositional phrases