Reviews for Trapped
Morcirith chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
you've come a long way.
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
It sounds a lot like my past experiences.

And all i am

Is Trapped, with a memory of you.

I really can relate. I love how you expressed the emotion in this poem so easily. Good job.
The Silver Tiger chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
you can put a memory into words so wonderfully it's amazing
mint maxwell chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
very good for one of your first! i understand the feelings written into that poem. i connected really well. very good stuff!
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Simple yet, elegant. The way you express the feeling of being trapped is relatable.

EB
L.M.Crow chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I like the idea of being so wrapped up in someone that you forget who you are.

Universal principles are good.

one of your better ones