Reviews for Glimpse
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
oh my God.

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can I say speechless? what can I say without fainting from lack of air? oh, yes; this is one dramatic and eerily fascinating ride. the flow and poetic choice of words is enough to leave me drooling, the undertone of something horrid in the place of what is barely scratched. it is CREEPY in the way my mind produces such scenerios between two people while reading this gorgeous poem. the imagery, though not much of it, was sparce and well placed. very effective. the powerful choice of words leaves my heart aching. I'd say you're a fantastic writer but it simply doesn't do you justice. I can not think of anything to say. the poem is just PERFECT.

author alert

* noelle
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Very good.
hey maria chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Simple and lovely. Great job.
Procrastinating Fairy chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Oh! This was so cool! And you know what? It's inspired me to do a sequal. Ahh! Someone talk me out of it! Or encourage it, I don't know...I had to get talked out of a sequal for LaF, too.

Anyways. I love this, really. I have a poem in mind right now, too, that doesn't rhyme...I'm gonna try to write that up right now...but this is YOUR poem and I am reviewing THIS not talking about me!

I love the ending line, and I could PICTURE it and it was SO COOL and...and...and...and I really cannot find anything wrong with it, so...so yeah.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
i have been in that situation myself. very nice, very well written