|Reviews for The Outkasts|
| The Great Charlatan chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Who is to say that there is a uniform being who is singled out?
There is emotion, but I would suggest rethinking this a bit. Needs work. You have the desire and the experiences to make the imagery, now take the time to do it right.
| FatedDarkness chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Uh...Too short! But it sums up what people say about me (though according to some, I'm TOO thin)