Reviews for The Outkasts
The Great Charlatan chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Who is to say that there is a uniform being who is singled out?

There is emotion, but I would suggest rethinking this a bit. Needs work. You have the desire and the experiences to make the imagery, now take the time to do it right.

Be easy,

Charlatan
FatedDarkness chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Uh...Too short! But it sums up what people say about me (though according to some, I'm TOO thin)