Reviews for Beauty was ran over by my tonka truck
kev chapter 1 . 5/26/2006 wrote an amazing poem! those last two powerful. good job!
astral boy chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I liked and agreed with your view on the whole fairytale thing. 'fighting for the life we once treasured.' was also a very powerful way to end the poem, because I'm sure it's true (on mot occasions). Well done, then.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
i really like this especially the flow please read and review.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
The irony of it all...I find it cool that you compare our existence to a corny disney movie. The words really causea ripple in day-to-day routines. So kudos to ya on that.

Random thought, disney movies are more gothic and twisted than you think it is..P...
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
It's ironic how fairy tales always end; their plots are always so predictable. In that sense, I never liked them.

Tongue Twisted chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
That really was quite inspiring. I think I'm going to put this as a referral on my next story...

Very well written, although I'd change the "per say" to "per se".