Reviews for Shadow
ThisisWhereIComeIn chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
a bit eerie, but very good. it's descriptive, and deep. I, too, have looked at my shadow, and wondered about it before.

nice job

darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Oh. This is kinda spooky. But I like it. The narrative style is awesome for this poem. Some parts are a bit unclear... but yeahh. That's about it. Oh yes, and you could use more descriptive language. You know, show don't tell... :). good job though
Miss-Nina chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Oh, pretty and somehow ironic! What a strange poem, never red anything like it. Great job, Chobi

Luv, nina-chan

o, thanks for reviewing my story! _
leben chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
lovely, peacefull ending; lovely, very contemplative; I adore it. A bit thought-provoking. Nice work