Reviews for Burning Out On Life
klutz-zilla chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
thnx 4 the review... this piece lacked rhythm... it didn't have a flow... although good description and vivid details, there was nothing that made it an excetionally good work... in fact, most mediocre work is better... good concpt & detail, but needs a little more work
drummerbonbon chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Nice! Thanks so much for the review... I didn't think my poem made much sense but I didn't have many poems about him... so yeah. Whatever. Thanks!
Sadistic Love chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Wow, very good analogy. So... different but very good. I like the somewhat odd feel of it. :) It sux that you did or do feel that way though. So many people live mediocre lives, that's part of what make those who don't, more grand. Only because of us and we could take it away... though I don't know how. Not that that really justifies it or anything. I may have the definition of mediocre wrong in my head, but I don't know if I believe there can be a mediocre life. Lives are too complex to ever be mediocre. meh, whatever, that's just what I think.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
I want to say with this one...sometimes you are rowing against the current and there is a moment you just decide to let go of the oars, maybe the current is fighting you because you are on the wrong path...drop the oars I want to scream back...I love poems such as this that makes me almost write one in response
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
I feel the same way. It sucks. Hope things go better.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Oh, that's the poem from earlier, I didn't think you would actually post it.

Nonetheless, it's brillant. I really like how you relate to subjects together and make them sound similar to each other. Just take a deep breath and hang in there, maybe you'll feel better soon.

EB
Ajna chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
So sad... But nice simile.