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   Speirmint chapter 9 . 2/21/2006 great story so far, just started it. and i cant wait to see what happens. update soon. |
| free-to-dream15 chapter 9 . 2/21/2006 Yay!Sry but Jack is an asshole, a complete asshole! I totally want her to get with Trent! If they don't end up together then I will be mad! lol UPdate soon! |
| Whispering.Lies chapter 8 . 2/17/2006 i really like it!write more soon! |
| Holly Young chapter 7 . 2/4/2006 Very cool. I love how yo added in the cat fight at the end! |
| TaurusGirl7 chapter 8 . 2/1/2006 update son! |
| messy chapter 8 . 2/1/2006 i like it very very much! and i can't wait for morE! |
| free-to-dream15 chapter 8 . 2/1/2006 K definitely loved this chapter a lot more than the first one! This one is def. a keeper! I also really think that Trent actually has feelings for Ally (maybe her for him?) lol update soon! (and don't hit me too hard when you read my update lol...i know sam spazzed out lol) |
| Neaera chapter 8 . 2/1/2006 Ok, well here's what I think: It's WAY better then the first chap you had there, but you're still having LOTS of trouble making it clear who exactly is talking... I got so confussed.. so much that I mean, I just kinda gave up cuz it didn't make much sense. If you don't put detailing in between people speaking, it's going to look like a script, ... not even a script because you don't know who's talking! Lol I'm sorry I'm trying not to be hard but to all honesty-stars above! haha... You just have to work on it, darlin. But it was so so so SO! much better then the last one. Keep it up suga! :o) |
| delusional101 chapter 7 . 1/22/2006 haha. nice chapter. update soon! |
| Kaede Kitsurani chapter 7 . 1/22/2006 A month? Wow, anyways, keep writing and get in the writing mood! |
| christine daae chapter 7 . 1/21/2006 love the story! update soon!Toodles!P.S.I found your user name on the reviews for Living with Daemon, both these stories rock! |
| free-to-dream15 chapter 7 . 1/21/2006 YAY! you finally updated. Yup there were a lot of grammar mistakes but ten bucks says that my grammar is worse. lol. I loved this chapter, especially when they got punished for "sleeping together" lol...the only CC i really have would be to maybe put a bit more description in it. other than that it was great! PS: you don't have to kill me yet for not putting up a new chapter! lol...I plan to post 2night if i can |
| Neaera chapter 7 . 1/21/2006 Sweet.. but you need work on actually making the scene descriptions actually change. ex: "The room was quiet enough to hear a pin drop, all that was heard is a light swish coming from the window with the breeze coming in." You have no idea they're in the Principals office... I thought they were still in the medical thingy... Yup, lots of grammar mistakes, I'm not even going to go into it. Later huns, keep it up |
| spastic chapter 7 . 1/20/2006 is it just me, or did you not say that tyler was her date in the last chapter, and her old friend at home's name was leslie, the one at school had a different name, i the person at the end of this chapter, are they supposed to be obvious, or am i told next i'll find out. |
| vicky vail chapter 7 . 1/20/2006 Hey i really like your story. you might want to proff read it though, there's some confusion with names i think. but keep writting! |