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   TaurusGirl7 chapter 7 . 1/20/2006 hah i really like this story! its pretty funny... although i dont particularily like alisons character very much... anywho, update soon! |
| lisagal chapter 6 . 1/9/2006 I really enjoyed this story so please UPD8 SOON! THANK-YOU |
| DiddlingFiddles chapter 6 . 1/4/2006 braduber sexy beast |
| free-to-dream15 chapter 6 . 12/25/2005 YES! Another chapter, and guess what I updated as well! lol! Yes another chapter! Did jack seriously leave her? What an asshole! jeez! lol. I like Brad, he makes me laugh! Hmm..my guess is that by the end...Trent and Ally are going to hook up! Well i g2g...happy holidays! |
| Neaera chapter 6 . 12/25/2005 love it babe. keep it up |
| Kaede Kitsurani chapter 6 . 12/25/2005 AH1 I love this story!Please update! |
| delusional101 chapter 6 . 12/25/2005 great chapter. merry kwansikah. |
| Frankie chapter 5 . 12/22/2005 Very nice story! Could you put in a description of Trent, though? I don't think one is in there, if there is one, nevermind,and disregard this otherwise useless review!~Frankie |
| Neaera chapter 5 . 12/22/2005 Love the story so far babe, it's really fantastico! Though I have some constructive criticism... "“First off, what and who I do is none of your business." In that sentence, you have 'what' and 'who' in bold. Try not to do CAPITALS or the bold or underlining.. it just seems a bit unprofessional, and no, we aren't professionals, but you know... "“Today, class, will just be an introduction to class. I will hand out the expectations for the class and what you will need to pass.” The thin, bald man at the front of the class stated, then wrote Mr. Berkins on the chalkboard. Class went on like this for forty-five minutes, then we were allowed to talk amongst ourselves until the bell." you repeat 'class' about five hundred times... five times to be exact... in every sentence... "“Yeah, now I have a free hour, then...Chemistry she said looking down at her schedule.” Lea said while walking out the door." yeah this part makes no sense... you could go with 'Yeah, now I have a free hour, then... Chemistry," she said looking down at her schedule while walking out the door.' that might work... Jack Burton actually, and she didn’t seem like she was dumping him. More like going to get to know him better.” “I am still in the roo-” “You can’t seriously be thinking about going out with that loser, are you?” “Wait you know him? And yeah I am thinking about going out with him, he seems really nice.” that get's me lost.. I have no idea who's talking here.. except for two lines where I know it's Ally and Trent talkin... “Fine if you’re so sure, let me pick the pathetic guy?” That shouldn't be a question. "“I agree to both, but for the person you choose you can’t choose yourself.” Somehow I knew something like that was playing in his mind, that’s why he added that rule about not disagreeing with who he picked." He never said that rule... you might have just forgotten it-but here is what he said "“Okay now you have to make them go on a date with you first, the thirty days doesn’t start until after the first date. Once the Thirty days is in progress you must act like a couple and can’t just avoid the other person.”" see, nothing about dissagreeing... Other then those.. there were a few grammer mistakes but those aren't really as important... Love ya huns, AND KEEP IT UP! |
| My OnlY SuNshInE chapter 5 . 12/22/2005 WHo Who Who? I must know! Sorry I'm just a little tired. I enjoyed the story so far. All though I have an idea whom will be picked but I still am in suspense, I mustt know!lol I blame it on the sugar I swear. Anyway I hope you write soon. til then, toodles. |
| ratliff chapter 5 . 12/21/2005 ooh shes going to be paired with trent isnt she? keep up the good work |
| delusional101 chapter 5 . 12/21/2005 duh duh dun! who is it! I gotta know! Kudos on a great chapter! |
| free-to-dream15 chapter 5 . 12/21/2005 OMFG! lol..this chapter was SO funny! lol..I was totally cracking up. I actually haven't laughed this hard in awhile! Hm..I think Brad is going to pick Jack ...and then that one girl i think her name was Lea or something for Trent! Can't wait to see what happens...dude you should so totally update on xmas like me! Because, like me, you left a cliff..althought I think mine was bigger but w/e...anyways...update like me on xmas so I will b happy lol...but I have to sneak down liek 3 am to update because xmas day is hectic so you might have to do the same! |
| Karolmac chapter 4 . 12/19/2005 i love this story please update soon! |
| lizziebobizzie chapter 4 . 11/30/2005 ooh this story is goody goody! update son! i wanna read more!- lizzie |