Reviews for Interesting Twists
free-to-dream15 chapter 4 . 11/29/2005
Wow! That chapter was sure interesting...so basically Trent is totally in love with her even though he usually kids about it (got that from the death glare) hmm..like what Ally is doing..lol...someday she is going to meet her match...maybe it's Tyler..Man since you updated guess that means I'm next in line ..well let me get writtin' Update soon!
x.your.brand.new.mistake.x chapter 4 . 11/28/2005
Awesome story. Love the plot! Can't wait to read what happens next. Good luck God bless!
Neaera chapter 4 . 11/28/2005
“I’m sorry if my pee doesn’t just shoot out of me.”

“Well then maybe your using the wrong hand,” he said laughing outside the door.

haha playing ddr... and u used my line! torpedo! hahah KEEP IT UP HUNS
free-to-dream15 chapter 3 . 11/19/2005
Awesome chapter! OMG I would totally pissed if I was in Jay position...maybe he has a hook up on the inside and can get it changed...who knows? Post more soon!
Karolmac chapter 3 . 11/18/2005
I am loving this story so far. I am already hooked. I love the plot within the story. I hope chapter 4 comes out soon. i can't wait to read it!
Neaera chapter 3 . 11/18/2005
You kno what Razzle.. I like Trent.. he sounds hot. Therefore, I am claiming him as one of my honey buns! hahahahahaha :o) and what.. you don't love your peaches? Why Razzle!... I think I'm going to cry.. O look.. a tear...

lol love it huns. absolutely lovve it :o)
delusional101 chapter 3 . 11/17/2005
awesome. that made me laugh so hard, you brought out a whole attitude that wasn't there before. At first, I thought she was a quiet, shy girl, but now, I'm seeing this whole sarcastic and spunky attitude. And you do a really good job in writing this.
J. Marit chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
cute story. write more soon please.

kellie
free-to-dream15 chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
"I remember the good old days" OMG I LOVE this line! OK back to the whole chatper..that was such a horrible thing that trent did to Jake but I was laughing when Ally smashed her buttery hand in his face! Nice chapter! UPdate soon (I just did yay!)
yarrowicefrost chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
That was Ace! I love Trent already :P, update soon!
delusional101 chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
great story. very funny. lol.
lizziebobizzie chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
OMG i love this story already! if this review is like really shitty dont blame me though beczuse this is my first time reviewing, but anyway, keep up the good work! i cant wait to read more!
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
hey girl...that was a good chapter..omg man what do they have to do that...well keep updating girl...loving it...peace girlo...
free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Very good. It's really sad that they are sending her away just because of the baby! Maybe there is more to it, what do I know? You have a great start so far...can't wait to see what comes next!
Neaera chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Ha! I'm your first review too! We! We so rock.. I love this story.. so much! :o) I love my Razzle! Keep it up huns!
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