Reviews for Gypsy Girl
Sukiam6 chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
I thought it was nicely done, I'm not sure if you planned on a rhyming scheme or not, because there were a rhymes here there. The only thing I could say to make this 100% is to maybe shorten it a bit, the idea of the gypsy girls loniless seemed like it was stated to a repetitve point.