Reviews for Life
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
this is ok but a little confusing. not ur best but still pretty good. great job,

mez
Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
I love the contrast you used in this one. Too bad there are only a few people out there that really see how much life sucks in the long run...v_v
ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Really nice, i particularly liked the lines "And the steps that are taken/ By the mass of wandering souls/ Are lined with stones and broken glass". They just jump out at me.