Reviews for Fall
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
sweet...but maybe you should change the last line? beautiful and short. great job,

mez
Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
You have gotten really damn good you know
ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Lovely setting, picturesque.
suckerplucker chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
too short. needs explication. and meaning.
BelovedOfAslan chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
I liked it! If you had several of these they would make a nice little rhyme about the seasons.