Reviews for Torture
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
nice ending. the repetition is good and the moods are conveyed well. great job,

Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
some people get so attached to torment that it is all they have left. at one point in your life, you will be afraid to lose portrayed that beautifully here
ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Wow, short yet you can combine the words and descriptions to flow really nicely so the reader/s feel it. Awesome stuff.