WHAT WHAT WAS THE LAST DEFENSE

Please please please update. You cannot just abandon something so well written

You should never let a good story go to waste. Please continue.

Please Update (:
You are really good

Please finish this

I'm really liking this story hope you continue it :D

are you ever going to update this?!

Please update soon! :-)

For God's sake, woman, CONTINUE THE STORY.

There's a missprint, love, in a previous chapter (four, if my memory serves) you listed the aunt as Georgiana's MOTHER'S sister; in this (chapter 8), you name her the father's. Just so you know; it was a little confusing.

OMG DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING! OMG OMG! LOOOVVVVEEED IT!

uh oh, what's her defense?
seems they are speaking at each other instead of really listening, and there is so much mixed emotion involved for all of them.

great update, and good luck writing

incensed because she could hear suspicious laughter behind her. -why is the laughter suspicious? or is '...she was incensed because heard what she SUSPECTED was laughter'?

'Lady Georgiana'/'Miss Ashton' -it's one or the other but it is NEVER both. 'Lady Georgiana' is what she would use if she were the daughter of a noble, an earl, marquis or duke. 'Miss Ashton', as she identifies herself in the first chapter, is the daughter of anybody else. That never changes. Marriage to a peer does not make a woman 'Lady FIRSTNAME. Check _Busman's Honeymoon_, by Dorothy L. Sayers, where Harriet Vane becomes LADY Peter Whimsey, by marriage and courtesy, not Lady Harriet Whimsey. On the other hand, Peter's sister, Lady Mary Whimsey, becomes Lady Mary Parker when she marries Inspector Charles Parker. Check out Debrett's on line: Titles.

Homophone confusion/typo: '...at least they would _no_ she had no intention on listening...' know? And why 'on'? No intention _of_ listening.
Interjections, like yes, now, and direct address are set off with commas. Yes I'm sure! -Yes, I'm sure.
The proofreading seems hurried.

This all seems very unlikely. Hasn't G lived here all her life, except for finishing school? So why is she uncertain where her family's land ends?

'... when he'd said the word 'lady'... -he **hasn't** said the word _lady_ in this section of the story, so that part needs to be removed. The whole of the third paragraph from the end needs editing. Too many characters speaking and the last half of the last line is meaningless since it is separated from what she said.

Such a cliffhanger! I need to reread everything before I can give any constructive reviews, just wanna tell you that I tried to get the books, unfortunately, Amazon said that kindle editions are not available for my area (I live outside US), so sorry about that. :) I was looking forward to read them. :)