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| DrownASiren chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
*clicks Add story to my Favorite Stories list *
wowthat was powerfulhow the normal parts contradicted the () parts and... wow lolwow, is all
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
I like this. Particularly the connection between the flower and the gun, and the time lapse motion that trails from the loaded gun to the aftermath. A strong piece.
| bihzhu chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
nice. i like the realism portrayed, and the almost nonchalant tone actually lends levity to it... i like! :)