Reviews for Dragon Fire
J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Very good. I liked the rythym and its smoothness. It flowed very nicely. Just one thing: shouldn't "your fast" be changed to "you're fast"? Not trying to be picky, just helping. Great work, though!
nightdragon0 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Besides giving an interesting image, it's got a nice flow to it too
Sab-chan chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Nice, very nice rythym. Dragons are AWESOME!
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Nice poem. I like the flow.