I loved this. It made me laugh the entire time. And yes, I will always chew my food.

Lol, I really was hoping Ms. Andem to escape, I do not know if I should laugh or feel sorry for her.. or for its, I dont know :)

Beautiful. Haunting and beautiful. This might just be the single funniest piece of literature that I have ever read. It's terrible, but amazing simultaneously!

Wow, disturbing, hilarious and really well written.

I don't think I'm going to eat M&M's ever again.

Also good job throwing the science in there, KNOWLEDGE IS POWER!

(Tha was a joke, it's hard to tell on the internet...)

christ, those poor M&M's.

Ew.

Adding to my C2

The stories you write are amazing. They always have so much detail and there is no exception with this one. The ending was the best and only something you would think up. Keep it up.

My god, I dont know whether to laugh or not. That was probably the craziest and most hilarious thing i've read.

Hahaha, that was awesome! Educational AND hilarious. XD I absolutely adore that ending.

And thank you for the review! )

You are one of the coolest people ever! That was really great! I loved how this was so serious and disturbing and even though it was just candy, I will never feel okay about eating M&Ms again. This was truly a wonderful piece on the death of chocolate and the moral behind it was firm so very, VERY important, lol.

Damn... nice story. From now on, I'll try to make my food's death as quick and painless as possible(especially M&Ms)

If you get the chance, read my story: Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising, and drop a review. Much appreciated.

See ya!

aka Mitternacht

That was inspirational. It would've been too heart-wrenching for me if the people weren't M&Ms. But I got through it okay; your descriptions are amazing.

And an inspirational message... Chew your food... (That really does apply to me). Hopefully, next time, my food will die a painless death.

Wow! I was left speechless from reading this at first. That whole m&m business caught me offguard. Not even the title hit me unitl I read the earthquake part, then the eye thing. And that ending, boy was that grotesque... I have give it though, this story was so comical to me it had me laughing and bawling at the same time once I figured out what exactly was going on.

Interesting story...although it will not stop me from eating M&M's _

Dude, ingenius, absolutly ingenius. I know this was a school project but you still made it shine... or in your case dullen... Darken! So continue your wrighting i dare say and give us MORE HOMIE MORE!