Reviews for Collapse
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Nice..poem. Keep up the great wiriting.
Ajna chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Beautifully sad, I absolutely ejoyed reading this. :)
AllyCred chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
WOW...that was amazing, i really liked the flow and the wording, i could sense so much emotion in this...well done.

lots of loveAC
Broken doll on a dirty shelf chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
...lesbians write the most kick ass poems! - I hope that wasn't offensive! But the last line just...I fell in love all over again! Lovely lovely piece of work!

HarlequinPlease fix me...