Reviews for Gentle Footprints
Valentine's Disease chapter 1 . 3/24/2006

love, val
Sini chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
I know that I already reviwed this, but I don't think that I said enough in the other review. This is absolutely amazing. And it's perfect. And I remember you writing this, and how it wasn't a very fun day. But there were great days after this. And I love it. FantasticFantastic, muchomucho bueno, fabulous job!
lessons you learn chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
You hold the answer deep within your own mind Consciously, you've forgotten it That's the way the human mind works Whenever something is too unpleasent Too shameful for us to entertain, we reject it We erase it from our memory But the imprint is always there.
perdita's kiss chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Sasori Kym chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Nice! The last two lines were especially beautiful, good job!
Princess White turtle chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
That was god and nice,Keep up the good work.
agirlnamed-aly chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Loved the message behind this poem and the array of words.

My favorite part was the repetition of "somethings last for never."

Great job!
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
wow... beautiful work!
Coloured Raindrops chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Yay! It's posted! Well, I think it's beautiful, fantastic job!-Sini