Reviews for Heartbroken Girl
lymli chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
the ending is filled with sadness n hate, but I think the starting was cute like every relation from first :)
Maddiecat chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
this is so beautiful, makes me remember how i felt when my boyfriend and i had a nasty break up. so awesome!
pixiepoptartz chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
I can really relate to this. : ) Good job
SavannahX chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Aw. That's so sweet!
PerpetualBliss44 chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
very good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job
Cloudstalker chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
this poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime
CraigAPrice chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
wow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
I loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.