Reviews for Poem of the Deceased
TheBrokenWanderer chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
I'm good at taking hints...obviously...This was a very beautiful poem...there was one line "light runs across the a paper"...not too sure that 'a' was supposed to be there...but other than that, I loved how you personified Death in the last line...adds a special touch to it...anywho...thank you for the review...as to that question that so many people have posed...yes, he did kill her...if you look closely, the first two times the chorus ran through, he was talking in present tense about her, in the last chorus, he was using past tense...subtlety my dear, is the name of the game...anywho...i shall see you again sometime...i very much enjoyed this...hopefully you won't be a stranger to me either...i enjoy collecting new faithfuls...

TheBrokenWanderer