Reviews for Unfiltered
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Once again, I loved how you used a unique format. Great work!
Disturbed Insomniac chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
interestingly written. i like it. *smiles*
simpletonsgrin chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
I think you went a bit overboard with alle the underlining and italiscizing etc etc etc. Other than that, it was pretty good.

Everything in moderation, you know? When you embellish it as much as you have, the frills sort of overshadow the real concept and body.

Keep at it- your work is worth it.

-simpleton
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
the format was quite unique some very good usage of words good job

keep writing!