Wonderful story!

This is second story of yours i read after Petals and i love this one as well!

Very promising sccript for play , or Television-and Film. What I'd like to know is..is this my Daughter's writing or truly my granddaughter-Daniell? Tabitha Knighton Nichols-Author of "Kellstone"-( Cat ) "The Heir" and "A Way Home" etc. and " Talons' Journal" Anyway..I'll keep reading!

Hi! This story has been added to ADoR under the Historical section. :)

Here's your review:

This was an extremely refreshing read. The story was short and snappy, but not lacking in action. It had tension and kept my attention throughout the whole plot. There was a meaning for every word and each character was extremely well developed. Everything was necessary and nothing was unnecessary.

Moreover, Tabitha and Melvin were the sort of couple you couldn’t help but root for. Their relationship was unique. They didn’t have the common formula of being an arrogant hero and a bickering heroine, but managed to make me fall in love with them with their sweet ways. But don’t let me waste your time explaining why I liked it. Go read it. You’ll be left like me, astonished and amazed…completely and utterly blown away.

While I did read "Petals" first (and I enjoyed it very much), I must say that "Tabby Cat" really made my day. Your characters are realistic, your situations entertaining, and your writing superb.

Cheers,

AnonymousWriter993

P.S. I can't wait to see more of William and Jenny, should their story ever arise. :)

haha! what a wonderful little story

Ch. 2... This story is just delightful.

I love it, I love it, I love it! He was such a random guy, but I loved how they both complemented their characters. Oh, and is his cousin going to have her own story? I love your stories, I truly do!

Lovely! Melvin's such a cad! I thought some of the chapters in the middle after Melvin proposed to Tabitha, was a bit cheesy and too much lovey-dovey especially since they weren't married yet. It was cute though!

Honestly, their break-up really got me though and I had no idea how you were gonna fix that but you did! So I'm really happy! Cool story!

absolutely loved it! one of my favorites!

so cute! i really enjoyed reading this!

Can I have Melvin by any chance? I don't mind that he's fictional ;)

Anyways, I love your stories and now plan to read the others, but I have already started them out of order XD

oh well!(:

Wow. I loved this story and I always have. I remember when I first read it, it was a year ago I think. I feel so bad for not reviewing but then I was new at FP and didn't know you could review without a user. But now I have a user. After a year. Yeah, i'm quick. I gotta say, this is such an amazing story and I truly don't get why it doesn't have like thousand reviews. Once again, great stories are thrown in the back. Such a shame. You're an amazing author, keep the good work up. Once again, love your stories and I'm not sure if you have stopped coming to FP ,but what the hey. Once again, an amazing author.

-mimi ( with me now, you have 200 reviews !)

Ever the charmer, that Melvin.

cutie patootie!

that was SUCH a cute story!

i really enjoyed reading it :)