I am going to go on a blood thirty rampage on Maxim! That bitch must die! Rawr! Lmao, sorry he pisses me off. I am surprised that Grace did something like that. o.O Heh, well I am stilling loving it desperately lol, so please update again soon.

- Cel

Awesome story! I love every character in this story, and I'm enjoying the fact that it isn't going along at a snail's pace, yet it isn't moving insanely fast

If anything, what I like so much about this story so far is how much I can relate to Grace so far. I'm sure other girls probably feel the same, but it's nice to know that an author can so accurately portray a character and her thoughts. So yeah, great job! Please keep going with this story cause I love it!

Nice! Update soon I loved the way Maxim and Grace interacted.

Wow, I love your writing style :) I hope that Grace doesn't do anything stupid with John cause I think he'll probably just use her . . .

Write more!

those first like 4 paragraphs... i feel like that sometimes. maybe not about writing -i enjoy it but i'm not that great- but that yearning.. _ it's maddening, no?

well, i really enjoy reading this story :) and thank you thank you for updating!

(geez, i sound like a big dork...:S)

Nice work. I love the way Grace and John are working around each other. Hmm... I wonder what's going to happen with Maxim, but I'll just keep reading to find out. Update soon!

hey, cool storyline. like the way the story unfolds. keep updating k? wanna know what happens between maxim, john and grace :) can't wait!

You are an amazing writer my friend. I am really getting into the story, I love Grace and her personality. She seems very real. Though I must say I truly wish to beat the shit out of Maxim. Ah, he's such an asshole lol. But he too does seem quite real, just a total jackass lol. But yeah, I am loving this story, and I can't wait for you to post up the next chapter.

- Celie

sweet story, keep updating

Awesome! I'm glad it gave us a look into her family life and also how John and she are going to work together. Nice, update soon!

boy, i cant wait for the next update. cool chappie. update soon! )

Nice story. I started reading it and I must say I like the plot. I don't know what will happen next but I hope you update soon so I can continue reading. Update Soon! :-)

i LOVE the plot. its really interesting. uh huh. hope to hear from you soon! ) good job.

I usually don't read het romance, but I saw this and was intrigued. I like the banter between the two. I can't wait to read the rest.