Holy crud. This is simply amazing! I love the concept of what happens when two seperate supernatural species mix. The characters are remakable, and the description of the pain Carlitos goes through is perfect! Great work!

I loved your story about the Werewolf and Vampire. I thought it was great and can't wait for the next Chapter :D

~Edward's Stalker

I liked this a lot better when it was the movie "Underworld".

huh, w/e, dont care for, it, just like u didnt care for mine!(lonely christmas) that was really low! i never said that it was in the horror category! i said it was in the romance/tragedy ctergory! u obviously cant really understand how a person realy writes! u cant grasp it, and it disappoints me! u dont know what that story meant to me! i have a sis who tried to attempt suicide a couple of times, and that just hurts tho! so, goodbye and farewell!

Crazy, same begining just longer, nicely done, and I see the title is fixed now. I've got another one I'm writing at the moment. My first two kind of died off so I decided to combind them and see what I can come up with. Figure a few more weeks before I post the new story.